我写的英文版军训打油诗一首

想~想

<>To be excellent as my mate</P>
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: q) u) c7 P) m  ^5 q  n<>The wind blows away the cloud,</P>
  B# t( }0 J9 {- i<>The sun shines bitterly on the ground.</P>
; |$ s4 Z, v/ m  k" G% P<>I feel pain on my feet,</P>
<>My back is covered with sweat,</P>
# p0 x- Q, `9 \" Y+ i  n<>My knees is shaking,</P>
; Z* a/ M& G0 ~& ?% a4 \7 T, `* g. J<>The military training is tiring.</P>
<>But I know everyone will bear the hardship,</P>
0 E6 O" s; C5 ^7 X$ G3 a<>No one will give up.</P>
/ E$ e9 ?% ^2 q$ ~) @$ I6 g3 d<>With the discinpline in my mind,</P>
0 p8 }, q. P" n! X<P>I will obey the offical's command.</P>
% q, D0 |; o' c<P>I will do my best,</P>
<P>To be excellent as my mate.</P>

风吹沙地

哈哈有意思,不过应该是To be excellent as my mateS吧

<>There're some words that can't be undersstood by me.</P><>How wish you were here!!My Longman!!</P>